This piece is soOo sad. I can completely relate to it, for I, myself, have been stuck in this predicament numberous times. And to feel this wayy really sucks. This was a very well written piece. And the emotions were intense. And your words were deep. A great write. 5/5.

OMG That poem gave me the chills...I absolutely loved it!
This is so amazing!
A true work of art!!

Well done. well written.
this poem was wonderful... but so sad.
5/5.
this is one of the best poems i've ever read.
and... ilovedit.

great job&&keep it up.

much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Very sad but extremely well written. 5/5

This was really sad.
it gets to the point across though.
everyone is pretty in their own way.
if you don't see it or not, they are.
but don't tell them that their ugly because their not.

some end up like this poem.
and some don't but they feel alone.
they have tired before.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Ah gosh, this was incredibly sad. The saddest of all things being that for a lot of people, this poem reflects their world. :[

There's just a few tips I'd like to give you, to help your poetry appear more presentable and neat, if you like.

-- First of all, make sure you capitalise where you need to. For example, when writing 'I'. I also capitalise the beginning of each line - but that's not mandatory or anything, just a personal preference.
-- You used the wrong kind of 'your/you're' at one point in your poem. Watch out for grammatical mistakes like this, as it could put people off reading your poetry.
-- Use more punctuation, such as full stops, commas, colons and semi colons. It helps with the flow of your poem, otherwise people don't know when to take a breath when reading through your poem.

Overall, it's a well-penned poem. Very sad. :(

Wow !! that is so sad, it brought a tear to my eye.
I could imagine the scene of the whole thing and see it in my mind.
Your words were really great though in my opinion it was an excess usage of words.
Over all it is such a great poem, and I think there is a really important message buried in it that everyone one should understand.

A beautiful yet sad poem, it held a lot of broken emotion yet it was an enjoyable read, If you go over the poem however and use some capps it would be a lot better.
Great work! Lovely choice of heading 2 =]

Beautifully written :)
"Looked in the mirror at her reflection. Something looked wrong." I know how that feels more then anyone.