I agree with this poem wholeheartedly.
It's unfair to being a child into the world when you're not ready.

"I know you cannot hear me, but i explain to you why, why i cannot keep you and have to say goodbye"

It was so bittersweet and brave
5/5
*Gem*

It was another great poem = ]

Great poem!
I couldn't imagine doing that. Your right no child should have to go through not being properly taken care of. Babies have many needs. I couldn't imagaine taking that way out. It must me hard.
*Brittney

Very nice jade good work 5/5

This poem is really gd i like it alot xx

That is very sad.
And I am sorry if its true.

The emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

I can understand that that was probably the hardest decision you ever had to make. i hope you thought it through properly. your poems so a lot of emotions and are very powerful. xoxo

That was really heartwrenching stuff, you conveyed the anguish felt. amazing!

This is really good and my eyes have tears in them..... wow 5/5

It was an ok poem, but i don't agree with it, if you weren't ready for a child, you should have used protection (unless you were raped). i wont vote on this because it is just going of my opinion on abortion, but having my son at 17 was the best thing i ever did. i had my first child at 13 and that was from rape, and he is in a different country now because of complications with his dad and my family, but i could never imagine taking the life of a child growing inside of me. i admire that you were strong enough to write about this.