"Daddy locked us in our rooms and told us all goodnight, i heard mummy screaming, but couldn't reach the light."

I liked this one because it seemed so innocent to a childs eyes yet so sad because no one should go though this.
I think you could do better in your lay out though with your poems.
Maybe like this?

"Daddy locked us in our rooms
And told us all goodnight
I heard mummy screaming
But I couldn't reach the light."

Just a thought =)
5/5
*Gem*

Wow thats a realli good poem.
no one should have to go thru that and i have alot of respect for u to be so brave about it now.
well done 5/5

Wow yes i must say you are a really good poet... alot better then some of the other poems i have read before = ]

Oh my gosh. You were right. I love this poem. That's terrible really. I hope things are better now.
Keep your head high.
Great piece!

Very nice and beutifull you have a great talent keep it up
hani

That one nearly made me cry.
I'm sorry if this really happened.

Good poem. The emotion was shown and it flowed well.

5/5

I hope to god that this isn't true but if it is my thoughts r with you. i especially liked the last line. it really summed up the mood of the poem. good work xoxo

Excellent work, you are really gifted, keep writing and never let your talent go to waste!
x

I agree with all of them^ wow that is so sad!!!! 5/5

I hope that isnt true! god that is so sad!

AMAZING!!!

Excellent poem, gave me goosebumps. it was good because the subject is very touching and you made it flow steady for the reader to carry on til the end. the language use was understood as a childs point of view which adds to the emotion of the poem.

well done on this. x