Paul, this is a lovely poem. You have written this piece from your heart which then gives it great meaning. You did an excellent job in putting the phrases together to compose one heartfelt poem.

"No matter the trail, if it looks like I'll fail.
For you, I'll continue to try. "

This last part of your poem was very sweet and it really touched me. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to reading more in the future.
Take care
Kristina