FREAK

by I love jake   Jun 19, 2007


I MET THIS GUY
THAT I THOUGHT LIKED ME
WHEN WE SAID HI
CAN'T YOU SEE

THEN HE TOLD ME
HE WAS FAKING
I NEED TO SET HIM FREE
NOW I AM NOT EVEN BREAKING

NOW I HATE YOU
WHY ARE YOU SO MEAN
THIS CAN BE TRUE
YOU CAN'T EVEN BE SEEN

WELL SEE WHAT YOU DID
AGAIN I HATE YOU
YOUR JUST A KID
HAHA TOO!!!!

*SURFER GUY THIS IS DEDICADED TO YOUR STUPID SELF AND PPLL PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL ME HOW YOU FEEL*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melinda

    I talk to jake i think he's a great guy.

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Haha...

    i read nearly all your poems here.
    there are all really cute and everything but this one is definitely the cutest. after reading all the others then this one, i can sense such an emotion change.

    its a good poem. you do have talent. the only thing i might want to suggest to you is, try and make them longer. i'm sure you can put so much more into each poem by adding a little extra. also, try using a bit more detail. this poem especially has feeling in it, however, if you put more detail in some of your others, your words will be felt more.

    well your poems are fantastic and i am definitely adding you to my favourites so keep up the good work!!

    much love .xx

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