Haha...

i read nearly all your poems here.
there are all really cute and everything but this one is definitely the cutest. after reading all the others then this one, i can sense such an emotion change.

its a good poem. you do have talent. the only thing i might want to suggest to you is, try and make them longer. i'm sure you can put so much more into each poem by adding a little extra. also, try using a bit more detail. this poem especially has feeling in it, however, if you put more detail in some of your others, your words will be felt more.

well your poems are fantastic and i am definitely adding you to my favourites so keep up the good work!!

much love .xx

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