You're my Perfection

by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum   Jun 19, 2007


As I sit in the disaster of my life,
I lament upon my past,
I think of the dark times,
How I inflicted pain upon those I loved,
Then I think of you,
How you made a less than perfect world,
A perfect place to be,
My undying love shall be yours forever,
So I ask you this now,
Will you be mine forever more?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Well written, makes me wonder who the lucky one is ;P

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was so amazing. The last sentence, wow. That really stood out to me. This was so sweet, great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem, it is sweet! You wrote this piece honestly and it is very touching. I don't like form of this poem but it is still very original and atmosphere is created greatly! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    LovelY.....

    luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by Raven

    Love this poem.
    To me its your best one because it has so much meaning and emotion in it.
    Like i said on the other poem, the person that gets your love is extremely lucky

    5/5

    ~Mz.Raven

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