Pillow Talk

by Jenni Marie   Jun 19, 2007


Everyday with you is a gift
For you mean everything to me
Want us to be together always
Hope that this you see

My favorite place is in your arms
Where I feel so safe and secure
Smiling to myself constantly
Knowing that this love is pure

My favorite place to look
Is at your beautiful face
Because when I know you're near
I'm in the perfect place

My favorite memory would be
When we made love after our moonlit walk
But the moments I look most forward to
Is when we share our souls with pillow talk

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  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    'Hope that this you see'

    That sentenced seemed a little odd to me. The rest of the first stanza was great. Think about revising this sentence.

    'My favorite memory would be'

    Seemed kinda short for that particular stanza (4).

    'But the moments I look most forward to'

    How about 'But the moments I look forward to the most'. That seems more fitting. You'd have to reconfigure the last line though.

    Good poem. I wouldn't give it a 3 like someone else did but not a 5 either so I guess you get a 4 lol.

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