'Hope that this you see'

That sentenced seemed a little odd to me. The rest of the first stanza was great. Think about revising this sentence.

'My favorite memory would be'

Seemed kinda short for that particular stanza (4).

'But the moments I look most forward to'

How about 'But the moments I look forward to the most'. That seems more fitting. You'd have to reconfigure the last line though.

Good poem. I wouldn't give it a 3 like someone else did but not a 5 either so I guess you get a 4 lol.