by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jun 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Far from my best, but we all have to just write some days and vent. Tell me what you honestly think. And. The title I wanted was too long, so. |
by Melpomene
Now this poem was truely [the] masterpiece. The title caught my eye as poetry and art is a big part of me so to create a poem which uses both of the two things I love and admire, and to actually make it good takes real talent. I must say the imagery was amazing really vivid, I could picture a girl painting on canvas with a brush in hand and her paints next to her. A beautiful piece. |
I love this one you have a true talent very well written 5/5 |
I really really like this one..symbolism is great and its almost lyrical that it could be a song..great work! |
by Fsams
Again this is a beautiful poem. You have include superb analogies in this piece that is the painting and the brush. I love the way you have described the poem with nice wordings. Great art of work. Max ratings |
by RetroRavey
You're right, it wasn't the best of yours that I've read, but it wasn't bad by far. I thought that it painted beautiful imagery and had a good flow. I also liked the unique style of it. 5/5 |