I thought that this was one of your best.The imagery you created was a talent of its own.When I read the things you write...I always feel kind of ...well not the best word but unsatisfied..not with your writing...but with the fact that I nor anyone else will ever be able to top it...So keep up the phenominal work..5/5
Brit

Beautifully written

Actually one of your better poems but the imagery, with the exception of baby and oh so and other useless filler words that can drag a masterpiece down, was quiet vivid. Sadly would work much better not marked as a poem but rather a short story. Again the filler words detract from the remarkable story telling and emotional tone.

You're right, it wasn't the best of yours that I've read, but it wasn't bad by far. I thought that it painted beautiful imagery and had a good flow. I also liked the unique style of it. 5/5

Ravyn

Again this is a beautiful poem. You have include superb analogies in this piece that is the painting and the brush. I love the way you have described the poem with nice wordings. Great art of work. Max ratings

I really really like this one..symbolism is great and its almost lyrical that it could be a song..great work!

I love this one you have a true talent very well written 5/5

Now this poem was truely [the] masterpiece. The title caught my eye as poetry and art is a big part of me so to create a poem which uses both of the two things I love and admire, and to actually make it good takes real talent. I must say the imagery was amazing really vivid, I could picture a girl painting on canvas with a brush in hand and her paints next to her. A beautiful piece.
~Mel