I like it. to me it kinda like lies ans sercts trying to be hidden from someone(the sun) thats why they want it to be the dark side of the moon. its really creative i like good job 5/5 for me:D

Wow... that was... interesting. But I really liked it. To me it felt more like a dance then a poem, and I really liked the style and flow of it. I also liked the subject and the way you put your thoughts across. Another great one. 5/5

Ravyn

This poem is descriptive and I found lot of beautiful metaphors in this piece. Your wordings are great and this is nice with a great lexical power. Max ratings

I like your poem because it lacks the rhyming bit..i dont think poems have to rhyme..as long as they have good flow and meaning its good..and yours did..i liked the creativeness and symbolism you put into this poem..keep up the good work.

I love it :)
Tis okay...hardly of my poems rhyme.

The meaning/magic is found in the words and the way you weave them together...and you've woven them together beautifully

<3 NovemberSong

Interesting choice of subject matter here. It's nice to see a non-rhyming poem from you. The idea behind this was very creative, and brought an interesting thought to my head.

Keep it up. :)

The topic choice of this was really interesting and unique. It's good to read poems that are not cliche these days because every time I open up a poem I am hoping that it's not another cliche poem to read. The non-rhyme was different from what i'm use to reading from you. I did like it and I belive you can pull off non-rhyming poems but I just seem to enjoy the ones by you that ryhme more. The ending stanza of this poem truely blew me away. A great poem which was interesting to read. ~mel