by On Cupids Bad Side Jun 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
*****this isn't really a POEM poem, it's just kind of a story or whatever.. it's just what i felt at the moment.. i wrote it in like 5 minutes : )***** |
Such an amazing piece of work, |
by Angela
Think poem is long as fcuk.. but i loved every second of it!! im glad i read the whole thing.. i which i wouldve ne ways becuase you had me from the beggining!! good job, sweet, cute,, good word choice |
by Alissa
This was amazing, incredible, I can't even explain, it held so much raw talent and emotion. I could feel every feeling you felt, you have a certain power to the poem that i wish i could gain. great job! |
Wow, beautifully written one. It is very emotional and captivating, excellently written. |
by Lozbi
It's magical. |