by Ashley Ann Jun 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love me a little less, my dear |
by Fsams
Well its good. I also believe that something is missing in this piece. May be you could introduce something new and fresh in each stock of stanzas. I guess you can do some editing or add some more lines. If you modify it plse let me know. I will be glad to rate :) |
by Ashley Ann
I added to it. |
by Brittini
I don't know what to say i liked it its different but to me its missing something im not sure what so ya other then that is good! |
by Ashley Ann
I added to it. |