I read it and the impact was near that of being shot it's wonderful...in a sad way

Nice poem... Very sad but at the same time very effective too...

I really liked the story line to this poem it read well, and the descriptions of not only your emotions but the surrounding was done quite well great job all and all I gave it a 5 out of 5 give yourself a pat on the back Plot121

Very mournful poem with good use of lexis and overall flow was great. I like the imagery and the intentnded message is clear. Nice!!

Tc
Fsams

What a sad and yet beautiful poem. Such a tragedy....but with this poem you have made a lasting tribute to your beloved brother. Very well done!!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid