by beautiful xx disaster Jun 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
As she combs her hair, |
by Nix
It is interesting, idea is original. I like how you wrote this one, it is short but very effective. Some lines are really excellent. It deserves 5/5 |
Holy crap. |
This poem is kinda different but oh well who isnt these days i like it keep it up |
This is a really good poem! 5/5! Keep it up! |