If you want me to help you
Then let's begin
First hun;do it as stanzas and make sure they are not too long as the lines' length
And please capitalize 'i's
But other than that
There were so many powerful words there
I liked it
Just be careful at these points and you will do it flawless
With love,
Laura

Hey well written! it really flowed no matter how you chose to structure it! i always think if a poem is good its good, why wud putting in stanza's make the poem any more meaningful or well penned??? exactly it wouldn't! so it looks prettier big deal! sheer talent speaks for itself here.

OMG That is amazing...I love it... That's......Wow. 5/5 easy.

That was totally awesome , great poem, well written and the flow was good, point made in poem it was good and it gets the readers attention, main things to remember, great job keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Wow....... again im speechless...thats just.......wow 5/5

Thats realli good aye.
i know people that go thru this kinda stuff and it shouldnt happen. well anyways 5/5 great writing...

5/5 :(