by Brittney Jun 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Sitting on a rock |
Omg!! u r a great writer i love this poem (except imma change the name t.j) when i read it cuz hes yours and i like sumone else...anyway i loved it and i give it a 5/5 |
by Debbie
You brought into play a refreshing setting: a nice place to daydream one's desires. I fairly believed that it fit well with the poem's ambiance as well. Really wistful and quite dreamy. I liked the little twist at the ending. An adorable piece. All the best! |
by JaMeS
Thats a really nice piece :) i like the way its an obvious message but also left you thinking of your own things good job and tieing in nature and your dream was a great idea! |
This poem is so deep! You blended the words perfectly and your really good at it! You've got some serious talent!! I'm happy for you and your man, too! Plz check some of my poems! |
by Rachel RTVW
Cute and sweet! |