by bacha Jun 19, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
In this world many people need some one to talk to But my friend I don't need someone special I just wont u in my life I just need u around I don't want us to go a part just me and u forever best friend in this world |
by Amina
I like it its very smooth, good writing piece here |
by bacha
Thanks for telling me i will do it soon :):):):) |
This is really good... though maybe you should try to split it up more so that readers can tell it is a poem,,, dont get me wrong it is really good and it is really origional, but maybe you should put it in a poem format. |
Its a great poem i can tell that u really care about your friend....keep up the good work |