Give up

My writing is never any good
I think I might just give up
Like a reasonable person would

Don't give up. Just write from your heart. It doesn't matter if it rhyms or not. That's not what makes a good poem. A good poem comes from the heart. When you just let your emotions out. Keep writing though. It helps in many situations to make you feel better. As you said, it helps you sleep better. After a while you will notice your writing has improved. Everyones does over time. The rythm and scheme will come to you. Everyone has there own style. Just keep trying and dont give up.
*Brittney

This is good- acouple spelling errors, but you do have a good flow and sense of rhyme. I like the third stanza- we write for many reasons. But definitely don't give up writing. It gets better with time and practice.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Your writing is fine
:P

No don't stop writing i think your writing is so awesome. besides writing should be about what you feel even if it doesn't seem anyone likes if it's what you feel inside and is truly sincere it'll always be awesome