by Nix
Beautifully written poem. It is very true, topic is great. Very unique piece, it has superb atmosphere and it is very deep, touching and emotional. |
by JustKristina
Great job on this!!! Wonderful idea for a poem. It is written so well and full of great word choice and emotion. You did a great job on this! keep it up! :] |
by Cyber Saiyan
What a great opening line, it really grabbed my attention. |