What will happen

by Loved In Hell   Jun 19, 2007


Her dreams of spreading her wings
and souring through the sky
were destroyed with the pain of cold reality
the beautiful eyes that once saw wonder
of the world
now clouded by tears
eyes only saw the hate of the world
and felt the icy touch of fear
in her life
what happened she questioned
how did she end up on the floor
now with only broken wings
faded color in a black and grey earth
what will happen to her
how long will it take to fix her life
and mend all torn inside of her
she has lost all hope

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  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    You will always have bad times in life, but it will always wake you up to the good stuff you weren't paying attention to. Everythingh appens for a reason and everything is a miracle, Amazing job as always, great flow - 5/5 GG23

  • 18 years ago

    by Mr M

    I usually do not read sad poems but u r to sad what i am to romanticism...i am touched here

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Another beautiful short and sweet poem by you. Again the flow is beautiful and the poem is nice with lexical and poetic quality. Your imagery is superb and its worth 5/5 and you got it :)

    With love
    Fsams

  • 18 years ago

    by Larissa

    U need to write a poem about muah!!! bwahahahahaha lol i like this poem!!!

    toodles love!
    Larissa!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Soraya Lowe

    That was so sad! I loved it, though! 5/5 Awesome job, huni!

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