by ASPHYXIATED Jun 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Abrasion covered her thin pale arms, |
by ALEX
Pretty good. I don't usually read ABC poems. I like the way it flows and the rhyming is nearly perfect. |
by Jake
That was quite good 4 you sayin its bad..well write more :) |
by HidinVictim
This is the best a b c poem ive ever had the pleasure to read, very very good. |
WOW that was very deep and sad , but wonderfully written ,and you word choice was excellent , a marvelous piece here , great job,, keep it up , your friend Tracy d................5/5 |
Great abc poem, love. |