Wow, im speechless, you have done an exellent job, this is behind great.. cause it is not just a poem but a great message and advise for today's young ppl to learn from it.
you should be really happy knowing you have done a great job touching us and teached a lesson to others. that is what i call a true poet...
another great job dear.

This was a good poem to too the description was done well the hook in the first part left me wanting to read it all the spelling needed abit of work here and there but for the most part a good job. Plot121