Omg i love this poem!!!!!! YOU HAVE REALL TALENT. what can i say this poem is freaken awesome

Ooooooop very very goood:):):)

i loved it for sure its a very good one:):):)

i will give ya 5/5:))

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

Once again another well penned poem, it flowed nicely.. I have one suggestion though..

Why do I continue to sink into the dirt()
= Put '?'

I feel the same way.
5
Awesome Job