by Richard Machado Jun 20, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
A dawn cracked morning, hast set forth a brand new day. |
by Tricky Daze
I liked how you riched this poem with sentences between...the flow and wordig was great on it |
Really awsome poem well more like a ryming story like a better more mature version of a dr suess story......thats a good thing lol i liked it it is going under my favs but your wording in this part |
That is really awesome! The flow is perfect and the words are very Poe-etic lol. I do think however that it would be better suited as a short story. It was really really good. 5/5 say I! : D |