Never seem to win

by Elapsed   Jun 20, 2007


Ever get the feeling that you can never win,
That everything you do is just a sin.

At first you're to care free,
But now you're over possessive.

Its funny how you never seem to win,
Everything seems to spin.

All my friends tell me to lift my chin,
To stop drowning my sorrows with gin.

Ever get the feeling that you can never win,
That everything you do is just a sin.

How do I find my happiness within,
When all love given are paper thin.

Ever get the feeling that you can never win,
That everything you do is just a sin.

Why must I give in,
When I see you as my heroine

Its funny how you never seem to win.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sometimes I think that all we do in life is go from one battle to the other. Some we loose and some we win... Keep fighting, S. I know you will win in the end, you can take my word for it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I totally understand this one =P When you figure out the answer to this one let me know lols I have no idea why love has to hurt so much =( Anyway, another fantastic poem that I loved like all your others =) 5/5 Like always =)
    Rhea

  • 17 years ago

    by Neta

    I like this poem good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    Thanks for commenting on my poem. I like this one. It is really good. It's mysterious in a way. I don't know how to describe it, sorry. Good job.

    ~Kat~

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