by Krazy Jun 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Tangled words build inside her |
Wow I liked this poem because I could just feel the anger boiling up inside her just waiting to explode like a kettle. The only thing I'm not getting is why is this poem under the love category? I think that it should be placed under something more suiting. anyway nice job. |
by StormyStar
This one too i know what its like lol i love how you get everything out like all your emotions.. and they are in such cute little ways and in cute little poems.. great job i enjoy reading your writing. |
by jackie
I like this one alot..very creative i wish to say. |
by JaMeS
Wow alot of passion building up inside nicely wrote |