Giving All Of Me.

by DeathlyAmore   Jun 20, 2007


I shall always except your heart.
The most perfect gift you bestow.
I shall embrace your open arms.
It shall never be free, nor let go.

I except your heart.
With all the strength in me.
I shall protect it, caress,
Embrace with my bliss and glee.

I shall open my arms and embrace you.
And enjoy the moment of utter bliss.
Bestow you all of me upon your hands.
And pray, you will never let go of this.

I give you all of me as you did to me.
And pray to the heaven's you keep it true.
For I have given my flesh and spirit.
To no one my love... but you...

I finish this with no other words to say, but,
Finish with a heart wide open, knowing what to do.
To tell you with everything I can inside of me.
My only beloved. I love you.

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Poems requires interpretation.
Main idea, Plot, Thesis:
"To except your heart and never let it go
To embrace your arms, and give you what you've given me"

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Definitions:
Glee: Great satisfaction and/or great merriment.
Bestow: To give as a gift.

To your consideration,
Samuel.

"I shall always, and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by JUSTiNA

    Beautiful poem. I'm in love with it.
    I hope someday i get as talented as u are!
    Thanks for the comment on my poem.
    Take Care && NEVER stop writing poetry.
    You're amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Awe`, exquisite poem!
    The flow is good, and the structure of your poem is to a great extent prearranged virtuously.
    Although denial is a defense mechanism in which I shall not use - I do think that you should rearrange some of your wording. :) There are portions in this poem which are highly good quality, and fit the poem good - and there are some which do not (in terms of understanding).

    I do, however - understand, clearly, and this poem is a delicate piece of work. It gets to the heart and touches the core - one of which (understandably), is the main functions of poetry. To my thinking, there are several others.

    :) Great poem, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Ur ana wesome poet u write such gr8 and emional pieces:D..i hope the person who u wrote this for really appreciates it:D..
    keep up the gr8 writes:D
    bree

    plzz read and comment on some of my poems..am new here i think i need help lol

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I really liked it and i hope whoever u rote it 4 liked it 2!!! it was very well written and seemed fluent to me! great job!!!=)

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Except is supposed to be Accept ... They sound the same but mean two different things . I make that mistake sometimes -.-'

    Overall, I don't have anything bad to say really . Nothing to correct besides what I noted above . Though I feel like repeating embrace & bestow kind of ... tarnished the words, but it's cool . It still worked, and it was beautiful .

    ..__MiNDYY

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