Ah, the person above me said that it sounded like you were writing vows for your wedding day...lol, i think it's just a little bit too soon for that :p anyway, i loved this poem just as much as i loved the last one. but now i shall "attempt" to write you another ;x
lots of love, liz
5/5.

Lol. kk.

It was a very beautiful poem. Nice work with different words and the stanzas flowed wonderfully. I really liked it. It was so sweet too, I'm sure whoever it was written for will love it.
<3Raych

Except is supposed to be Accept ... They sound the same but mean two different things . I make that mistake sometimes -.-'

Overall, I don't have anything bad to say really . Nothing to correct besides what I noted above . Though I feel like repeating embrace & bestow kind of ... tarnished the words, but it's cool . It still worked, and it was beautiful .

..__MiNDYY

I really liked it and i hope whoever u rote it 4 liked it 2!!! it was very well written and seemed fluent to me! great job!!!=)

Ur ana wesome poet u write such gr8 and emional pieces:D..i hope the person who u wrote this for really appreciates it:D..
keep up the gr8 writes:D
bree

plzz read and comment on some of my poems..am new here i think i need help lol

Awe`, exquisite poem!
The flow is good, and the structure of your poem is to a great extent prearranged virtuously.
Although denial is a defense mechanism in which I shall not use - I do think that you should rearrange some of your wording. :) There are portions in this poem which are highly good quality, and fit the poem good - and there are some which do not (in terms of understanding).

I do, however - understand, clearly, and this poem is a delicate piece of work. It gets to the heart and touches the core - one of which (understandably), is the main functions of poetry. To my thinking, there are several others.

:) Great poem, 5/5.

Beautiful poem. I'm in love with it.
I hope someday i get as talented as u are!
Thanks for the comment on my poem.
Take Care && NEVER stop writing poetry.
You're amazing!