by Dawn Davis Jun 20, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
We often loose sight of whom we are. |
by Barry
Brilliant poem...... your best so far |
by Barry
This journey I take on faith alone, |
I find the rhyming quite erratic, but you know what? It doesn't seem to matter that much. There's something very deliberate about the way it's written that means this fact doesn't really detract from the intention stated so clearly in that first line. |