I find the rhyming quite erratic, but you know what? It doesn't seem to matter that much. There's something very deliberate about the way it's written that means this fact doesn't really detract from the intention stated so clearly in that first line.

This journey I take on faith alone,
lighting a candle to guide me home...
I glance back once more as I exit the door,
a smile, a tear, a thought so clear..
Hello me, I've come to see,
the love I search for I find in me...

these lines speak volumes......5!

Brilliant poem...... your best so far