Comments : You have a dangerous face and an illegal taste

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is different, i liked it well done on this xxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked thequestioning media here and the things you explained were so true in our lies all around the world
    But I guess it would be so good if I point 2 things

    First something that breaks the flow and seems unnecessary 'the' s...I thought if there will be a mistake if they are out..but unlike this,it gets the poem alive

    And as second just a little mistake occurs here
    Media have:media has

    Other than that it was so real and good
    Beatifully penned,
    Laura