Wow- This is a powerful piece. The rhyme scheme flows so naturally, but it is your unique imagery and phrasing and the emotion behind it that really make this poem stand out. Excellent piece. Great style.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

I really like this poem it just screamed with so much raw energy and the descriptive way it was written is awe inspiring

This poem was awesome! The imagery and the organization was perfectly placed. 5/5