This is a very emotiv poem!..and has alot of depth to it:D great job!!
bree x

RAWRRRR!
my little ovshak has poetical skills!!!!!!
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this was effing amazing. Emphasising on the effing.
ilyyou.
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I think u've bein hiddin ur poetic skillz from us lil jess aww... ur poem was full of emotion it was sad and intense loved it! 5/5

Wow, again that was really intense. sad too. good word choice again.

Wow..emotional..i loved it 5/5 keep it up