"insanity, maybe thats what i was meant to become" <-- my favourite line in the whole poem, i found it to hold so much depth and power and it created such strong emotion for me. the emotion and depth you poured into this piece was beautiful, it was overwhelming without being overbearing. i didn't like the many fillers you used in this (I, you, and, the etc) i thought it greatly affected the flow and made it shaky in a lot of places. i was also thrown of because some parts of the poem rhymed while other parts didn't. the imagery you created in this was amazing, very intense and it created vivid pictures in my mind. i loved the ending, i found it to be stunning and hard hitting.