It really felt like a song lyrics and it can be a great one I think..bnecause the wording and tyhe topic is good at this masterpiece
And 'In love I trust.' reminded me of 'In God We Trust'
Keep it up,
Laura

I really enjoyed reading this poem. it's so great!! The ending was amazing for me..
Good Work! =]
--Viola

I really enjoyed this, is seemed very song like while reading, very nice job!