Thanks For The Memories

by Bryan   Jun 20, 2007


Time stands still as she sits here and writes,
pouring rain, while the moon shines down light.

Locked up for weeks, the whole time she has wept,
spending every second thinking of promises unkept.

He said that he loved her, and this he had swore,
that he will never hurt her as he had done before.

But he is good at this, he knows how to pretend,
how to break her heart so, and do it over again.

But this time he has done it, he has gone too far,
as the background plays "Teardrops On My Guitar".

She writes him a poem, it's her final goodbye,
she wipes the tears, as they begin to fill her eyes.

Swallowing that pill, the last line comes to a summary,
in large letters for all to read, Thanks For The Memories.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    AHHHHHH!!
    another amazingly beautiful poem!
    i could really relate to this... i felt the sadness she felt... i knew what she was going through, why she was doing what she was.
    the flow and rhymes were perfect (as always)
    the is definately goin into my faves
    great job!
    5/5

    ~Sandra

  • 17 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Oh my gosh, you are making me very emotions right now bc you wrote such a beautiful poems. In deep inside. Yeah, good job and keep it up 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    A different piece from you too me I found this to be a different style you have taken up from you other recent poems and I really loved it. The two line stanzas were really effective in the two lines you held so much beautifully sad emotions. Again Bryan a piece of amazement viewed in my eyes. Well done ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    The flow in this was good. A sad piece. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great and sad wow beautiful 5/5

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