Aww it reminds me of someone :( Anyway it's really good. I like the rhyming in it and great vocab. 5/5! as always

Amazing poem ...i dont think it could me any more perfectly writen....

ashleigh

thx for commenting :)

A very dramatical poem... suicide because of a broken heart... It rhymes very well... the rain was a nice trick for a dramatic enviroment... works like an amplifier... Ending was good since the titel is mentioned ... It leaves a strong effect...

A very good poem bryan =)

Wow! amazing! loved it! keep it up!

Oh man! Great write Bryan! I love it, all of it; the words, the flow, the way it felt to read...perfect! I really loved how you put the title in the last line, and how you used rain and moon light for the dramatic effect. Keep it up!

~Morgan~

Yeah, very dramatic. I could never pull that off... and you even threw "Tear drops on my guitar" in there... hah, good song... loved the last stanza.

Wow?....Nice poem...It's very emotional and very to the point. It's very sad actually...and its got so much feeling in it. I loved the "The tear drops on my guitar" sentence very much, like a lot of other people who commented above me. It's a beautiful write...really/...

How poignant. Methought this piece was quite spectacular and never failed to strike a chord with me.
Lovely work, m'dear.

Debbie cakes (^^,)

Wow that was great and sad wow beautiful 5/5

The flow in this was good. A sad piece. Nice job!

A different piece from you too me I found this to be a different style you have taken up from you other recent poems and I really loved it. The two line stanzas were really effective in the two lines you held so much beautifully sad emotions. Again Bryan a piece of amazement viewed in my eyes. Well done ~mel

Oh my gosh, you are making me very emotions right now bc you wrote such a beautiful poems. In deep inside. Yeah, good job and keep it up 5/5.

AHHHHHH!!
another amazingly beautiful poem!
i could really relate to this... i felt the sadness she felt... i knew what she was going through, why she was doing what she was.
the flow and rhymes were perfect (as always)
the is definately goin into my faves
great job!
5/5

~Sandra