Nothing Left

by Cheyanne   Jun 20, 2007


Still swollen from yesterday's bruises
Puffy eyes from all the painful cries
It's funny how much you could lose yourself
How fast time seems to fly

Cant take back all of the hurt
The damage has already been done
The clouds now stare down at me
For you've taken away my sun

Everything that made me, me
Is now rested in your hand
I lost myself in you
Like water absorbs into sand

You took myself away from me
For that i have me to blame
As i sink in the depths of destruction
I know nothing could ever be the same

I gave up my heart and soul
Like any naive girl will do
Just to win the heart of the guy
She'll pray will love her too

It's the love that is too strong
That will destroy & interupt fate
But before you realize your mistake
It will already be to late...

Now im just a nameless girl
empty as ever can be
All because i loved too much
Until nothing was left of me......

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  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    This is amazzingly written..I love it. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Fantastically written.. I really like some of the creativity on your lines.. the use of your feelings to try to explain it to someone else is difficult.. You have conveyed your thoughts wonderfully, and it's a sad poem. Very well done. 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    This poem is great. keep up the awesome work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Beautifully but painfully written 5/5 i especially liked this stanza:

    "Everything that made me, me
    Is now rested in your hand
    I lost myself in you
    Like water absorbs into sand"

    fantastic piece!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    Second stanza second line, I think is should be has. Just thought I'd tell you.
    Other than that. This is a great poem. I really enjoyed it.
    *Brittney

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