by CHOKE
Hmm, the flow was kind of messy. but other than that, great job. |
by Mezmeryz
Hmm, that was a bit scary but yeh good description and i kinda got the metaphorical meaning of the poem too, if there was one , or was meant to be, i dont know, i just saw one. lol if that makes sense. |
by Kristi lee
I love it |