Comments : Death Trap

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Hmm, the flow was kind of messy. but other than that, great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hmm, that was a bit scary but yeh good description and i kinda got the metaphorical meaning of the poem too, if there was one , or was meant to be, i dont know, i just saw one. lol if that makes sense.
    nuff luv, keep writing xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    I love it