This poem is very well written, I loved it. It was so descriptive and painful, but I enjoyed reading every second of it.

Because it flowed and rhymed so well, with appropriate words for the feeling, I rate it 5 and place it in my favorites box ^_^

~Richi~

O.O this was really a dark poem, very chilling yet extremely gorgeous....... the flow and rhyming were good too. 5/5
gabriella
btw i like your pic. :D

Wow, this is incredible poem. Atmosphere is dark and you wrote this one powerfully!
With blood stained hands,
I reach for the promises you spoke.
On the horizon I see your face,
Uttering words, from which I choke.
^That stanza is the greatest. Wording is also superb.
Well done, this poem truly deserves 5/5

I...don't know what to say......you should be very proud of this poem. It shows pain, sadness and dispair. With very little effort it seems you have captured hopelessness and shown the reader what darkness means.

IM GONNA ADD YOU AS MY FAVORITE BECAUSE I LOVE YOU POEMS SO MUCH

Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow WOW!!!!! omg this is awesome. i loved it so much. i can relate to it. 5/5. ur added in my faves.

I sew my battered soul,
Urging scars to repeat their pain.
Hence forth I am broken,
Driven from all that is sane.

These lines are very catching and I loved the way, metaphorically you have used the word sew. I like the whole poem and u deserve 5/5. tc

I loved the flow of it, and once again great word choice.

Dark!! isnt it? Once again you have managed to capture my attention and that is good because very few can..
"
It shatters to the ground,
Turns black, and fades like dust.
Instead of burning flesh,
My body begins to rust." 5/5 This was my favpurite stanza.. keep writing you're good at it
~Hope~

This was very well written! it is dark!! it really captures your attention 5/5