A beautiful girl (finished!!!!)

by Beautiful Disaster   Jun 20, 2007


A beautiful girl with gorgeous eyes
a hidden world
of hurt and lies

A beautiful smile to hide the pain
living life
with nothing to gain

A pitiful future with dreams of tomorrow
embracing the world
with arms of sorrow

The rotting flesh of a beautiful life
all once seemed
so delicate and nice

A beautiful girl submerged in blood
hitting the floor
with a final thud

A precious soul that didn't last
a gorgeous girl
who's life had passed

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  • 13 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, I love it..
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This captures the reader soo strongly. i love it. the use of contrast is great!

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Thank you very much ^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    That was written very beautifully and even though it was short i wouldnt add or take away anything to it....it was a great read :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Zemotion

    Wow this poem is one of the best i've ever read! well done! its so full of emotion and i just love it!

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