Wow, this was really deep.
It had so many metaphors that you expanded on. The flow was amazing and it was so pure. The talent showed clearly here.
It was long, but worth it.
I loved the way you used cliche lines,
and told them in your own way.
I especially loved the part
"And one day you will be a masterpiece
You just have to wait for the right painter to come along"

amazing, great job! 5/5