Little Heart Of Mine

by Mezmeryz   Jun 20, 2007


I'm in so much pain
Because people won't stay
You keep taking the strain
Little heart of mine

You keep going away
Then coming right back
There's nowhere you'll stay
Little heart of mine

Once you leave, you're forgotten
Why won't you understand?
Stress will turn you rotten
Little heart of mine
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I will never mend
You have no other way
Now when will you end?
Little life of mine

*1ST 3 STANZAS, me talking to my heart.
*LAST STANZA, my heart talking to its life.
Makes sense?

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Senorita*

    Very nice peom. yeah man i understand it. lovely . good job =]

    jess xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I loved how casual you were talking like it is really common for you. I know it is for me. But what I loved most was that your little heart spoke back. This poem was great. Keep it up.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame

    Kool....it does make sense...alot of sense. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Interesting, i like it, great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by x l0v3 y0u x

    Rather goood little confusing but li like the use of how you keep repeting the fact of your talking to that "little heart of mine"

    veryy goodd!

    NuffLoveBabe.. <3

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