This was awsome! 5/5

Hey, wow this is an amazing piece of work, beautifully written and very emotional. shows true feeling which makes this a wonderful poem. keep it up!!

I like how short and simple this poem is. It works so well. It is sad, but shows a side that I believe everyone goes through. Great job! Keep writing. 5/5

~Kat~

Wow that was amazing! i loved how each stanza ended with the same line, except for the last stanza

I will never mend
You have no other way
Now when will you end?
Little life of mine

^i loved that, and it was filled with such emotion... 5/5 from me, and keep it up!

Your poem is greatly writen and shows great emotion. It sounds like you have been through alot in life and you can always talk to me if you want to. Great write. It shows true talent and true raw emotion. Nessa

I loved your poem..It was very good..

Hey,
I like your poem, its simple but very nice, im sure that a lot of people can relate to this poem, I like it that you repeat the line: little heart of mine and that in the end you wrote little life of mine, awesome:) the flow is good so you get a 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

I like the repititon and the changing of it in the last line. Very nicely done. The emotion is this poem is wonderful. It screams of hurt and pain of losing someone. It's very very well written and I think everyone can relate to it. Flow and word choice is wonderful, nice rhyming. 5/5 for sure.

So simple yet so amazing : ) Keep it up!!
5/5

Great poem well written

Exelent poem sorta like a song:D

Great Poem! It Was So... Outspoken.. Lol

Well written poem. The repitition was great. It placed emphasis on all the right parts. And the fact that you were speaking to your heart seems to point out confusion. The rhymes were well done and consistent. And the poem itself was very emotional and saddening. Great job!

This is really nicely written 5/5
great job.

You keep going away
Then coming right back
There's nowhere you'll stay
Little heart of mine

aaah that was such a nice writing style i loved the way you have expressed your feelings. great job
and i m giving you 5/5

That's a really good little poem! 5/5! Keep it up!
Sarah xx

Quite a well written poem... The rhyming is very good and the fact that you end each stanza with the same line that is equivalent to the title makes it even better....
I don't think that you go off track in any part of the poem so to be honest I see no flaw worth mentioning at all

A very good poem indeed =)

Great poem.
Beautiful written, nice flow.
Enjoyed reading it.

That is so sad!!
it's beautiful at the same time.
very well written!!

Yer i like this poem :) ur gd at writin poems keep it up love it! x