5/5 great work.. got a good rhythm.. alot of emotions shown in this poem.. keep it up
.x

Wow that was great i loved it
carly

Its a good poem, shows us how much strain we go through and yet we always come back

5/5

This rather is a fine piece of work. How the heart gives burden in our lives is also how it induces a sense of relief and enlightenment within us, it is a part of our system after all...
Lovely work, nonetheless. =]
Keep on writing.
all the best and take care!

~Marian

I loved this poem. Its so sad and so true!
Thanks for putting some of my thoughts in words

I loved the ending!
that was tight
i wasnt expecting that , i liked it alot
im gonna give you a 5 :]

Tu mayri!!! kuti kamini!!

SowiIiIIiIii jus mad at u.. u kno im ere fr u!! its a great poem ovusli jus lyk al the res bt nex tym tlk to me!!! oh n stay strng xmwahx

I like it. Its unique and really good.

That was brilliant! i absolutely loved it! so sad but so ... beautiful! 5/5!!

xo
maria

Thats very good and i like the 2 different views, its very good well done xx

Rather goood little confusing but li like the use of how you keep repeting the fact of your talking to that "little heart of mine"

veryy goodd!

NuffLoveBabe.. <3

Interesting, i like it, great job.

Kool....it does make sense...alot of sense. keep up the good work

I loved how casual you were talking like it is really common for you. I know it is for me. But what I loved most was that your little heart spoke back. This poem was great. Keep it up.

5/5

Very nice peom. yeah man i understand it. lovely . good job =]

jess xx