by Beautiful Disaster Jun 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The story starts with once upon a time, Dreaming about a life that was never mine. |
Wow! Wow! Wow! This is a poem i can relate to! Well done! |
O0o0o0o! I like this one! a great question posed at the end. This poem will definitely make people think when they're done reading it. ;) nice job! |
Alot of imagery. really well done 5/5 |
by Nix
Great poem, short but excellently written. I like the first stanza the most, topic is good too.5/5 |
by STEVE
I love your poem it is sort of sad but you work out the real meaning without having to think 5/5 |