That is really powerful and to recieve that shivering sensation in such a short and short worded poem is so deep, I really like it

I like this. The wording is unique and the way you set it out doesn't conform to cliche structures, which would devalue the meaning. I don't understand all of it but obviously it is hard to if we are not in your position. I particulary liked the ending, it reads to me as a resolution not to give up. Nice write :)

-ariana