Wow! this poem was intriguing and so mind capturing. my favorite stanza was,
"I'm running out of time,
where do i run now?
life is catching up with me,
and i do not know how,
cos when you've been running,
as long as someone like me,
you'd think the memories would be forgotten,
and i would be set free."
it was tough picking a favorite stanza though
because the whole poem was amazing.
anyway great write 5/5 love.